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How to Write a Bonus Request Letter (With Samples)

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Every employee reaches the point where they want to ask their manager for a well-deserved bonus. You’ve brought in thousands this year, went above and beyond your job description and targets and spent endless hours working overtime to ensure all the extra projects you were given ran smoothly. But how do you go about asking for a bonus? Talking about money is never easy, and at times not appropriate. Yet to ensure you get what you deserve you need to muster up the courage and talk about your earnings.

What should you include in your bonus request letter? Follow this in-depth guide to find out tips and tricks and more importantly how to format your bonus request letter to ensure you get the financial appreciation that you deserve.

 


 

The Structure of a Bonus Request Letter

As with any formal letter in the workplace, you need to abide by some formatting rules, in order to to ensure that it's readable and professional.

Your letter should comprise the following structure:

  • Sender’s Address: Start by typing your address at the top right-hand corner of the page. In American English, the sender's address can sometimes be found in the top left corner.
  • Date: Leave a few lines and then write the date below the letterhead – skip this part if your request is via email.
  • Subject: If you’re sending your letter via email you may be contemplating over the subject. There’s no need to be extravagant here - you can simply write “bonus request”.
  • On-Arrival Notices (optional): If you want to include a notation that the letter is personal, you can do. Ensure that it’s written in uppercase. E.g. PERSONAL or CONFIDENTIAL.
  • Inside Address: Your company’s address should be written a few lines below the above- again if it’s via email, skip this step.
  • Salutation: As this is a formal letter make sure you address the reader appropriately – even if you're pals with the boss. You could open with ‘Dear Jane’ or ‘Dear Ms Smith’.
  • Opening Paragraph: Start your letter with the reason for your request and the amount of bonus you think you are entitled to.
  • Body: Give solid facts and reasons as to why you deserve the bonus. This could include unpaid overtime, an impressive sales record, or a stellar yearly performance; alternatively, maybe you simply didn’t receive your annual bonus when your co-workers did.
  • Final Paragraph: Finish your letter by sharing your gratitude and appreciation for the company, just to ensure it ends on a positive note and does not come across as a demand, but rather a question. It doesn’t harm to ask, right?
  • Closing: Avoid closing with a simple ‘thanks’ and instead choose a more professional ending such as ‘Kind regards’ or ‘Yours sincerely’.
  • Your Name and Signature: A letter isn’t complete without your name and signature. If you’re handing in a printed letter, opt for a hand-written signature. If you’re sending an email, simply type your name, followed by your contact information.

 

Tips to Follow to Ask for a Bonus

When it comes to talking to your manager about a sensitive topic like pay, you should always be cautious. Follow the below tips to ensure you’re taking the correct measures when approaching this tricky subject:

  • Speak to Your Boss First: If you have a good relationship with your boss, approach this topic in person first (you can take your letter with you if you like). Make sure that your tone is subtle, leave the negativity at home and focus on your hard-work and achievements - ideally with a few specific examples to hand. It’s always good to ask for more responsibilities at this time, too, to show that you are dedicated to the company.
  • Play it Cool: It’s important not to rely on your bonus as part of your needed income as it’s not a guarantee; avoid telling your manager how you were depending on this money. Remain cool and collected throughout the conversation. If your request is rejected – ask what you can do to get a bonus the next time around.
  • Don’t be Pushy: As mentioned above, keep in mind that you are asking for a bonus; not demanding one. If you are too insisting; you may get your bosses back up when it comes to the next round of bonus payouts.

 

 

Sample Templates

Whether it’s for a general sense of appreciation, or because you have a specific reason (such as spending many hours working overtime on a successful project), we’ve put together a few different templates that you can use when requesting a bonus:

Sample Letter


Your Name

Your Address

Your City, County, Post Code

Your Phone Number

Your Email Address

 

Date

 

Name

Company Address

City, County, Post Code

 

Dear Mr/Mrs Last Name,

 

I am writing to request a bonus for my recent work in [project name] for the company’s HR Department. The billboards designed were created during my own time and helped resolve employee shortages. By reviewing my personnel records, you will see that I am an hourly employee, not salary. I logged over 50 hours of extra work on this project, all of which I have not been reimbursed for. While I don’t mind helping out with projects and extra assignments, my hours have exceeded an acceptable amount of time to donate without payment.

Because of the shortages at the company, many people are working overtime and longer hours. I knew how important it was to make sure that these signs were done, so HR can begin to promote our company at job fairs. After working over a week of additional time to help out, I feel that I should be reimbursed for my efforts.

I have been with the company for over 12 years and have always been punctual and loyal to the business. I have devoted myself to the company and always made sure that the best interests of [Company Name] was protected.

My normal salary is [insert amount] a week or [insert amount] an hour. I worked an additional 10 hours over a normal workweek, and at time and a half, that would be [insert amount]. The materials I spent on this project were [insert amount]. This includes signage, paints and paintbrushes. I am requesting a total of [insert amount] to cover my time and expenses.

I look forward to discussing this with you soon. I can be reached at [insert number].

 

Yours Sincerely,

Handwritten Signature

Name


 

 

Sample Emails


Subject: Bonus Request

 

Dear [Manager Name],

 

As we approach the end of this quarter, I would like to take this opportunity to highlight my extraordinary performance during this period. [Describe in detail how exactly you over performed. What were your achievements and what did you accomplish?]

I am confident that you agree that my hard work should be rewarded. I hereby kindly ask you to consider a monetary reward commensurate with my latest performance. I am willing to give even more and would be thankful if my efforts are recognised.

 

Kindest Regards,

[Your Name]


Dear [Manager Name],

 

I am happy and delighted that we have successfully completed the [Project Name]. The vibes circulating are very positive and the stakeholders seem satisfied with the results. [Add further details on the project]. This is an accomplishment that I am proud of and feel that it’s a huge turning point in my career.

I’ve demonstrated strong capacity and potential in finishing this project before the deadline and within the allocated budget. I have complete trust in your vision and evaluation, but I don’t want my efforts to go unnoticed. It’s been more that [number of months] since the project delivery and I was expecting a token for my efforts. It really means a lot if my dedication to the business can be rewarded. While I appreciate the verbal rewards, it would be beneficial if they were translated in more tangible ways.

Thank you for your consideration.

 

Kindest Regards,

[Your Name]


Things to Remember

Asking your boss for more money is tricky ground, with many people feeling the risk isn't worth the reward; indeed, that's why so few people attempt to claim bonuses even though their work has merited one.

It’s important to value yourself as an employee, though. Here are a few key points to remember:

  • Copy in the HR Department: Remember to copy in the HR department as they will need to hold a copy for your personal records. They may also be able to assist with your request as they often are the decision makers.
  • Review Before You Send: Be sure to proofread your application before you send it to your employer. You wouldn’t want it going to your boss with typos. It’s also useful if you read your letter out loud to make sure your key points are crystal clear.
  • Wait an Appropriate Amount of Time: If you haven’t heard back straight away, don’t fret! Give it some time for the decision makers to deliberate before they get back to you.
  • If the Answer Is No: Be open to other benefits like holiday or flexible working hours. If that is rejected, just use it as motivation to improve for the following year and make sure your name is on the bonus.
  • If the Answer Is Yes: Congratulations! But beware - bonuses are given for the year ahead to make sure you stick with the company. If you want continuous success you will need to make sure that you keep working at it.

 


 

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